Thursday, August 25, 2016

Week 1 Storytelling: Hector the Green

Hector Protector was dressed all in green;
Hector Protector was sent to the Queen.
The Queen did not like him,
Nor more did the King;
So Hector Protector was sent back again.

(traditional nursery rhyme)

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Hector the Green

There was once a young boy named Hector who dreamt of being a knight. 

Since he was born, all Hector wanted to do was fight. When he was 5, he protected his mum from a man with a knife. Using only a spoon and all of his might, he chased the bad many away into the night. 
When Hector was 8, as if by some fate, he defended a seamstress called Kate. She was so grateful and wanted to thank young Hector, but she had no money to give. All she could fashion was a shiny green cape. Hector was reluctant to accept the gift, but Kate insisted. So he obliged, and wore his new cloak with pride. 
By the time Hector was 12 he had made a name for himself as a skilled fighter and swordsman. So much so that he was often told he would make a formidable knight. So Hector decided that he wanted to become a knight.
To do so, he journeyed to the largest castle in the land to see the King and Queen. The castle was far away from Hector's home, and it took him many days to get there. Once he arrived, he asked to speak to the King and Queen so that they might make him a knight. The court granted his request, and he awaited the King and Queen in the grand ballroom.
When the King and Queen arrived, Hector was summoned before them. He knelt. "What is your name, boy?" asked the Queen.
"Hector, your majesty," replied Hector.
"And what is it that you want, Hector?" interjected the King.
"I want to become a knight, to serve as your protector, sire," said Hector.
"Oh really?" mocked the King. "How could a boy as young as yourself possibly protect us?"
Hector pleaded his case, citing his many victories in duals and encounters with evil men. The King and Queen listened to his story, and whispered to each other for a moment.
Finally, the Queen spoke. "Hector," she said. "You are brave beyond measure, and your stories are wonderful, but we cannot allow you to become a knight."
Hector was crushed. "Why not?" he asked.
"Frankly," said the King, "you are too... green."
"Green?" said a puzzled Hector.
"What my dear husband means," added the Queen, "is that you are far too young to defend us with your life. Perhaps when you have grown in body and mind, we might reconsider. But for now, your place is at home with your family."
"But-," started Hector.
"Our decision is final," grumbled the King. "You are dismissed. Return home at once, and do not return until you are a man."
Hector was crushed. Though he could return and try again, years felt like too long of a wait. Hector mounted his horse, and rode away in tears.

My idea of the boy Hector Protector, dressed in green. Painting titled Prince Sigismund Casimir Vasa of Poland in Polish costume, circa 1644, by Peter Danckerts de Rij.

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Author's Note: Hector Protector is a very simple nursery rhyme, as you can see. I imagined Hector Protector as a knight because of the 'protector' in the name, and the reference to king and queen. I chose to use Hector's 'green' garb as a metaphor for his youth. Youth would provide a fitting reason for the king and queen sending him away. Naturally they would want a protector to be around them, so there must be another reason for their not liking him. I gave him a little back story to the 'protector' name, in the form of protecting his mother and the seamstress. The seamstress served to provide the literal green that Hector wears.

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Bibliography: The story is based on the nursery rhyme "Hector Protector" in The Nursery Rhyme Book, edited by Andrew Lang.
Photo of painting Prince Sigismund Casimir Vasa of Poland in Polish costume, circa 1644, by Peter Danckerts de Rij, available at Wikimedia.

3 comments:

  1. I really liked how you decided to make parts of your story rhyme like the original, and I also liked the backstory you gave to Hector. It was nice to see how dedicated he was to his dream of becoming a knight, and how brave he was at a young age! I think the age intervals were a good touch, and showed that he really did have what it takes to become a knight (someday).

    I’m glad the story had a hopeful ending, and that one day he may come back and become the knight he always wanted to be.

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  2. It's so cool that you kept the nursery rhyme feel to your story. I never would have thought of that. It seems like it would be much harder to tell a story in rhyme! I think you added some great detail. It definitely makes sense to me that you made Hector a knight. I also think your dialog added a lot to the story. Nice job! It was fun to read.

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  3. I was impressed with the rhyming, but I was disappointed when it stopped, was that intentional? This story was really easy to read and follow, I was upset when I reached the end. It would be cool if you incorporated Hector into your next stories so we can follow his growth throughout the semester. Maybe replace Odysseus with Hector and at the end of the adventure have Hector become a knight?

    Just some ideas for you, I look forward to reading your other works throughout the semester.

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